Wednesday, May 12, 2010

This I Believe Essay

I believe that everyone has a guardian angel at some point in their lives. I believe that when someone looses a loved one or just someone who was close to you, they will be your guardian angel that is there to protect you and guide you through your life until the end.

Many people believe that only people who have done something bad or someone who is doing the wrongs things in life only have a guardian angel, and I disagree. I think everyone has one. They would be someone who would always look out for you, and make sure you’re doing the right things.

When my grandpa died two years ago, I thought it was the end of everything. It was the first time I had to deal with a death of a family member. I was very close to my grandpa too, making it even harder to say goodbye to him, and not seeing him again. I was always thinking about him, wondering where he was and if he was watching me or making sure he was still in my life even if he was dead. People may think that I’m crazy for thinking that, since everyone believes that when you’re dead, you’re gone, and I really didn’t believe that when anyone told me.

I can remember one day when I was thinking about my grandpa when I was playing my volleyball game for school, and I really wanted to have good serves throughout the whole game. I was thinking that maybe my grandpa is watching me and he could help me do well this game. I did very good that game, and it made me realize that he is watching over me and always helping through the things I need. After that day, every time I thought about him

I can see where people are coming from when they say they don’t think they have a guardian angel. Some people have had many deaths happen in their life, and still don’t think they do or they just don’t believe they have one, but I think that everyone will sometime in their lifetime. You just got to remember that probably not all the time can your guardian angel help you, but they are still watching over you, and they will help you when the time is needed.
I will take positve and negative critisism.
Tell me what if you feel the same way about it.

I know that sometimes things could not be good for you when a family member or someone close to you dies, but I believe that they are still there, and they will help you through the tough times. All you have to do is realize and believe that they are still in your hearts forever.

4 comments:

  1. The 5th paragraph is not supposed to have the positive and negative and how you feel about it, that was supposed to be at the end. ;p

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  2. Wonderful story on this i believe, i enjoy it ALOT. I dont think you have to improve on anything. This artical will make alot of people who have had/has lost their love ones feel better:)

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  3. I think that what you think is true and there's not much that you need to improve on. Great piece.

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  4. I really liked this piece!!! It makes total sense. I think you did an awesome job, and i can't think of anything to improve on. :)

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